It was windy as I looked out from the stadium to see Piri Weepu... Suddenly I heard the strong voice of Piri Weepu. I turned back and saw the terrifying Piri Weepu leading the haka .
The advancing warrior was there slapping,screaming and stomping like music in my head. At last all the thumping was gone and it was time to play the game.
Finally Piri Weepu defends strongly, passes nonstop, sprints quickly and breaks through like a bullet to the try line.
Piri Weepu is special to me because he make a great ambassador!
I really liked the sentence starter "The advancing warrior..." This interesting sentence starter really hooked me in. Keep using interesting sentence starters in your writing Sam :)
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