Tuesday, 15 November 2011

My Beautiful Place

Far beyond the world is my beautiful place...

In my beautiful place you see stars forming beautifully in the moonlight.

In my beautiful place you can hear fireworks explode loudly like a party cracker that blew up in your ear.

In my beautiful place you can feel the softness of the cloud and the fresh scented air!

You taste pizza, cookies, cake, ice cream and other things you can think of.

In my beautiful place you can smell funky fart bombs and fruity Lollipops.

If my beautiful place was real, would you come?

1 comment:

  1. I really liked the alliteration you used to keep me hooked Sam. It was very funny too! Keep trying to add a bit more detail to each paragraph because you are such a good writer and I want to read more!